Friday Fictioneers in 100 Words
Find the challenge here: https://rochellewisoff.com/2022/05/11/13-may-2022/
https://forestwoodfolkart.wordpress.com/2022/05/13/friday-fictioneers-in-100-words/
The Challenge: write a 100 word story using the photo prompt below. Photo by Dale Rogerson
The Cat Burglar
He crept silently down the hallway, prepared for the unexpected. Although he had watched the house long enough to know that no one was there, he was still careful. He scanned the room. The single red rose caught his eye. He ran the end of a gloved finger over the delicate red petals, his thoughts on the woman who lived there.
He had studied her intensely over the weeks, had gotten to know her every move. It was his job to know his victims, but she was different. He pulled his gaze from the rose and quietly left, empty handed.
Excellent. I was hooked from the first word. You developed suspense and intrigue! Well done. Thanks for the shout out.
Thank you! It is the first one I’ve done and it was a lot of fun!
Rochelle’s hosted this challenge and I agree it sure was fun to participate for the first time. It was my first time joining in as well.
Fabulous story, so creative!
Burglar or stalker motivated by infatuation, either way a dangerous situation, told with a quiet tone.
Ah, now I’m wondering whether he’s a stalker or a genuine love interest! Either way I’m intrigued – definitely feels like there’s more to come.
Hummm. A tough guy with a soft spot. I’m glad the soft spot won.
I like how you leave so much unexplained. I’m imagining different directions this could go, different motives he might have for his actions. However, I suspect something sinister is afoot.
Welcome to FF! Great story, I’m glad his mind was changed on this occasion at least!
Welcome to FF! Excellent first story and methinks he became enamoured of her while stalking…. I don’t know what is scarier!
Somehow it is more chilling that he left than if he’d stayed. I don’t think I’d want to be his “special” victim. My mind also wanders to whether he will accidentally meet her somewhere and try to start a relationship with her. It’s a great start to a bigger story, imo.
Thank you for the comment. This is the first time I’ve done this and it is a great way to inspire a story! I might have to continue in 🙂
You’re welcome. I’m glad you gave FF a chance. They are like potato chips, you know, nobody can write just one 😉
Nicely done. made me want to know more. 🙂 And welcome to the FF squares.
Dear Angie,
A Hearty, albeit a bit tardy, welcome to Friday Fictioneers! You managed to tell us quite a bit in your 100 words! Warning this exercise in word conservation can be addictive. I look forward to reading more from you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you Rochelle! It was a lot of fun. I love reading all of the different stories that people have come up with. I’m definitely looking forward to future challenges. Thanks for hosting it
Very suspenseful story which I enjoyed reading.